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Had to have a look after all the fuss I have read recently. So downloaded from Amazon.

This is a personal opinion but it just did nothing for me. When we meet Rahual before anything else we are given a run down of his characteristics and I like to at least start the story before given a list of what they look like. It's the same with Sahil.

Unfortunately I found the work didn't flow at times it felt like a list rather than an unfolding story. And I'm not sure if it is just the kindle version because sometimes they do not seem totally edited but this book jumped around from 3rd person to 1st on a regular basis and it stopped any flow for me.

The pace and the story were okay it just didn't speak to me. Sorry!